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Vhoscev Nerocide

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Supreme commander of the rusting legion.

This is a character I plan to use in my book someday. Vhoscev is an ageless cybertronic entity of a forgotten and extinct race. He is the creator and commander of thousands of horrible robotic soldiers that lay waste to his enemies across the planet. Vhoscev is a cruel and heartless genius who dreams of creating his own world out of flesh and machine, he works tirelessly in his labratory to create the perfect merge, a living, breathing, self-sustaining, robotic being.

I am still trying to learn pen and I am still not super confident with it. please hold no punchs with your criticism becuase your input is valuable to me. :)

also I love questions, Ask away!

© Zach Wilson 2010
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FireMarioWii's avatar
You know, this design reminds me that of a vulture. You give it such a brooding nature and quite a bit of grim power. You can see the calculating thought patterns in his brain, echoing and charging.

The only thing here that seems off it that you gave him depth when the image is flat. I know that sounds like a stupid reason (and it might be) but it somewhat gets confusing to my eyes. His body is in a flattened position but the shading and extra details would suggest otherwise, providing a bit of an estranged contrast.

Aside from that little confusion, this is a very well done drawing that really displays your knowledge of shades and imagination, to twist for your machines.